DAY7 - How was your trip to New York?

📚 영어전화 수업 피드백 정리

오늘도 영어전화 수업에서 여러 문장을 연습했는데, 직접 말하면서 놓친 부분과 강사님이 교정해 주신 내용을 비교해봤어요.
이렇게 하나씩 정리하다 보면 다음 수업 때는 같은 실수를 줄일 수 있겠죠? 😊


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1. I ride a bicycle.

교정 전: I ride a bicycle.

교정 후: I rode a bicycle.
💡 과거 경험을 말할 땐 과거형 rode 사용.



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2. Jeju is famous of green tea.

교정 전: Jeju is famous of green tea.

교정 후: Jeju is famous for green tea.
💡 famous of ❌ → famous for ✅



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3. We went to hiking.

교정 전: We went to hiking.

교정 후: We went hiking.
💡 to hiking ❌ → hiking ✅ (go + ~ing 형태)



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4. Food is famous black pig meat.

교정 전: Food is famous black pig meat.

교정 후: Black pork is the most famous food in Jeju.
💡 의미를 자연스럽게 재구성.



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5. I was in the park this morning.

교정 전: I was in the park this morning.

교정 후: I was at the park earlier today.
💡 in the park → at the park (위치/장소 표현 자연스럽게 변경)



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6. I was in a meeting all afternoon.

교정 전: I was in a meeting all afternoon.

교정 후: I spent the entire afternoon in a meeting.
💡 더 풍부한 표현으로 변경.



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7. I was reading a book.

교정 전: I was reading a book.

교정 후: I was engrossed in a book.
💡 engrossed in → ‘몰두하다’라는 의미로 표현 업그레이드.



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8. They were watching a movie.

교정 전: They were watching a movie.

교정 후: They were viewing a film.
💡 viewing a film → 영국식·격식 표현.



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9. I went to Busan last summer.

교정 전: I went to Busan last summer.

교정 후: I visited Busan during the previous summer.
💡 방문 의미를 visit로 변경, previous summer로 격식 표현.



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10. We had so much fun.

교정 전: We had so much fun.

교정 후: We enjoyed ourselves immensely.
💡 enjoy ourselves immensely → 훨씬 풍부하고 고급스러운 표현.



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11. I usually cook dinner for myself.

교정 전: I usually cook dinner for myself.

교정 후: I usually fix myself some dinner.
💡 fix myself dinner → 미국식 일상 표현.



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12. I live alone.

교정 전: I live alone.

교정 후: I have my own place.
💡 의미를 부드럽게 전달하는 대체 표현.



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13. My boyfriend like cooking.

교정 전: My boyfriend like cooking.

교정 후: My boyfriend likes cooking.
💡 3인칭 단수일 때 동사에 -s 필수.



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14. He has good cooking skills.

교정 전: He has good cooking skills.

교정 후: He has excellent culinary skills.
💡 culinary skills → 더 전문적이고 고급스러운 표현.



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📌 오늘의 포인트

시제 일치 (과거는 과거형)

전치사 정확히 사용 (famous for, go ~ing)

의미를 살린 자연스러운 재구성

같은 뜻이라도 어휘를 업그레이드하면 더 세련됨


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다음 수업에서는 오늘 교정된 문장 중 헷갈렸던 표현들을 중심으로 복습하고,
비슷한 상황에서 바로 말이 나올 수 있도록 연습해 보려고 합니다. 💪